Plain Language Principles

Citation
011 FW 2
Exhibit
2
Supersedes
Exhibit 2, 011 FW 2, 01/18/18
Date
FWM
N/A
Originating Office
Policy and Regulations Branch

What is plain language? Plain language is communication that your audience or readers can understand the first time they hear or read it.

When writing chapters, you should:

路&苍产蝉辫;Organize the information logically. Think about what information you are providing and organize it so that it makes the most sense to your readers. Depending on the policy, you may organize it chronologically, by subject area or issue, by responsibilities for requirements, or in some other manner. Prepare an outline or use some other method to organize your thoughts before you begin writing.

路&苍产蝉辫;Use active voice. When you use active voice, the person or organization responsible for taking the action is the subject of the sentence. It is easier for the reader to tell who should do what.

(1) Use active voice:The Project Leader assigns tasks to the wildlife biologist weekly.鈥

(2) Avoid passive voice: 鈥淭he wildlife biologist鈥檚 tasks are assigned to him/her/them weekly.鈥

路&苍产蝉辫;Use helping verbs that make the requirements clear.

(1) Use:

     (a) Must for an obligation (e.g., You must publish results on the internet within 10 working days.),

     (b) Should for a recommendation (e.g., You should review your goals twice a year.), and

     (c) May for a discretionary action (e.g., You may send the report to the Regional offices for comment.).

(2) Avoid 鈥渟hall鈥 and 鈥渨ill鈥 for requirements. They are ambiguous; readers can interpret them in different ways. It is appropriate to use 鈥渨ill鈥 when you intend to write in the future tense.

路&苍产蝉辫;Use short sentences that are easy to understand. Break up long, complicated, or run-on sentences into multiple sentences.

路&苍产蝉辫;Keep your language simple. You do not need to use formal or legalistic terms to sound official. Use the simplest words that still get your point across. For example, use:

     - 鈥渢ry鈥 instead of 鈥渁ttempt,鈥

     - 鈥渟end鈥 instead of 鈥渟ubmit,鈥

     - 鈥渋f鈥 instead of 鈥渋n the event that,鈥

     - 鈥渟tart鈥 instead of 鈥渋nitiate.鈥

路&苍产蝉辫;Use pronouns. Use 鈥渨e鈥 or 鈥渙ur鈥 instead of 鈥渢he Service鈥 when it makes sense to do so. Talk directly to the reader when possible.

路&苍产蝉辫;Avoid hidden verbs. Hidden verbs are verbs disguised as nouns. They鈥檙e usually longer than they need to be. For example:

Don鈥檛 use鈥

鲍蝉别鈥

Conduct an analysis

Analyze

Provide assistance

Help

Do an assessment

Assess

Present a report

Report

路&苍产蝉辫;Contractions aren鈥檛 bad. Although you must avoid using contractions in official correspondence, you may use contractions when writing Service Manual chapters when it鈥檚 effective to do so.

路&苍产蝉辫;Avoid jargon. Avoid technical and legal jargon whenever possible. When you must use technical terms that only certain people will recognize, define them the first time you use them or include them in a 鈥淲hat terms do you need to know to understand this chapter?鈥 section at the beginning of the chapter.

路&苍产蝉辫;Minimize the use of acronyms and abbreviations. When you must use acronyms or abbreviations, spell them out the first time you use them. If you only use the term a few times, spell it out instead of abbreviating.

路&苍产蝉辫;Use vertical lists to make it easier for the reader to scan the document. It is much easier to read a vertical list than a large block of text. Assign letters or numbers as shown in the chapter template (Exhibit 1, 011 FW 2) so that the reader can reference paragraphs.

路&苍产蝉辫;Use examples to illustrate explanations. Sometimes a short, concrete example helps the reader to understand a complex idea. When appropriate, use examples instead of long blocks of text.

路&苍产蝉辫;Use tables and figures. Use tables and figures when they make information easier to understand.

For more information on plain language techniques, read 116 FW 1, Plain Language in Fish and Wildlife Service Documents.